By Emma Stinga
Have a look at the fantastic Jabberwocky-inspired writing from our Year 6s.
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The horrible forest was dark gloomy and scary. It smells like a dirty sock that had been used but never washed for years. When you stamp on the floor you can feel all the animals bones that had been eaten and buried by the Jaberwocky. You could see all the humans that have been statue and you can hear the animals and humans screaming like a tornado forming. It is a disoomy place, where the Jabberwocky lives, and no one would want to go.
This serrible monster is no other than the mevil Jabberwocky of legend. He has: tongue like a snake, nails as sharp as knife, wings so big and disgusting like bugs smuoohed together, slithery feet and tails as long like a giraffe. He eats animals in a disrespectful manner and statues humans and the only way to free them is to kill him.
I, Hanifa Hoque, came and promises to kill this mevil monster and free their people. I quietly walked in the disoomy forest and found the Jabberwocky having a nap on the bush. I crepted close and with my two sharpful sword I chooped of him head and a big scream echoed everywhere! All the humans that have been statured turn back to normal. They were FREE!
All the villergers looked at me with disbelief as I came toward them with the once statured humans. We all had a great party and we all was hapful. We danced and sang songs. It was a unforgettable day today.
Everyone thought the Jabberwocky was dead even Hanifa but was it actually dead…
You have some lovely ideas, Hanifa, and I can tell how much you have enjoyed reading the Jabberwocky poem for your inspiration. Well done!
In the old days, a mythical warrior entered the woods where the fierce Jabberwocky lives his life. The warrior was undefeatable; he had the Vorpal axe that could be only claimed in the Vorpal volcano, located In the middle of an island on the sea.
The Jabberwocky was terrifying, strong, cold hearted and mostly bold. Its movement made his opponents dizzy and scared. It never stopped hunting. It was always looking for food.
Suddenly, the warrior heard haunting sounds coming from his back. He knew it was the Jabberwocky, out of nowhere the 300cm Jabberwocky jumped of a tall tree and started powerfully squeezing the warrior with two hands!
After that, the warrior needed to think fast. He came up with an excellent idea. The warrior pretended to be dead so that the Jabberwocky would think that he squeezed the warrior to death.
The weather was cold and rainy and the snow was falling on the ground and the Jabberwocky was hiding in his cave.
The villagers were in the woods then found Jabberwocky as he was walking around Jabberwockys cave. That was walking in the village.
I took up my powerful/magical sword, put on my mask, Armour and I took a sword into the woods.
I fought long and hard then I rested on a log that was cut off of a tree.
I took the Jabberwockys head and then we celebratedin the woods as well.
One day a fierce knight went to the forest with his badge horse and saw trees old as broken down houses that smell like poopies. Hear leaves swaying down of trees slowly. He tastes air whilst galloping on a horse.
Then he sees a dragon called the Jabberwocky leambing around like a dismade dragon. Breathing atomic fire breath coming out of his nostrils swaying, like a tornado.
Suddenly he finds him, slashing him behind the tum tum tree, in one hit he falls and collapse too the long grass.
Ashe galloped back to his home holding his head and putsh his way home. When he gets home he has a party with his father. They feasted on deliosous food in honour of the fierce knight defeating the vicious dragon/wyvern who ate all those people in the village.
The naked woods, the swaying trees and the gunpowder left from Halloween. The Jabberwocky roams around and steals as much little children as he can. He hypnotizes them and makes a stew. For the parents, he bites their toes and sepresses them without doubt.
This mass murderer, cold-hearted and crazy monster is the one who will disobey you. Slimy feet, stinking breath and not to forget his rigged teeth. He moves in a zigzag way and eats all of our family. Making horrible noises and making women blubbed as I know for all.
I, DylanCharles, shall kill him once and for all. I find him behind the tumtum tree sleeping merrily. Swish swash and a stab stab leaves him dead and we are safe after all. The sword smashes through windows as it sways in the wind.
Finally, our town is saved. We cried, we screamed and we had a feast. We cooked his head and had it with bread
I like your jabberwocky writing just put some commas and full stops.
My uncle warned me “stay safe from the octopus monster” when I was a child. It looks disgusting as an worm; green slime. Yet I could kill it.It was strong but he’s just strong. So I had to find it and kill it.
What my uncle told me to kill it when I’m prepared and he said go to the dark scary oak jungle. And he said use the big better sword on the octopus monster.
“Hey you octopus monster you are finish” I said. The octopus monster forted me so I forted him until the end of it.
At the end of the fight he was down, so what I did is stab my big better sword in his head and I said” evil never wins, good always When I came back I told everyone “the monster is dead “so the village celebrated the legend hero with a party and presents from every one; singed; loved; hugged each other. They even made me a statue of me
My mother and father have always told me about the mancani ”Beware the mancani.” Imagine a monster; Eerie like medusa; scary like a grinch; ugly like a blobfish. My parents always told me I will defeat it but I thought they said it just to give me hope, but I dreamt one day I will defeat that seaweed green creature.
I left my family feeling like I am going to fall off the Tower Of Terror. I had only one weapon; a clean metal axe to help me cut it’s head off clean. I stayed far and watched him as I wrote my plans. His eyes of flame, looks fierce and a body of a dinosaur.
It came to the day where I had to kill him, I put on my shiny armour. I went to the woods it smelt like rotten leaves, it felt like mould and worst of all I saw him devouring his dinner which, was innocent children. I felt sick. I got closer steadily…
The mancani finally fell asleep [after dinner] I tiptoed closer and closer getting my axe out, seeing children’s bones leftover. With one CUT! his head was cut off clean; I felt glory all around me, I galloped back to the city proud with blood dripping out of it’s ugly head.
My family joined me and the people of the village prepared a massive feast. Everyone worshipped me like a king and sang beautiful hymns. It ended nicely and I was ready for my next adventure… Remember you can do anything.
I love some of your descriptions, Wissal! Well done!
The smell of blood and souls filled the ghastly air. The cave was wet with a green, chunky, thick substance which nobody knew what it was. Bodies lay at the entrance. I woke up my father was beside me I was having a dream I was having a dream – a bad one about the Husk. I was meant to fight it today. So I picked up my scarred six-shooter, filled it up with rounds and set off.
The woods are dark and deep with mist,
As I venture out to kill-eat the legendary jabbawockey.
Leaves are scattered upon the forest floor giving away my position.
As I slouched under the sanctum tree ,
I notised a fowl odour coming from the south.
I turn my head round as I’m faced with a green- eyed, stone faced Jabbawockey!
He was preparing for an attack when I,
Dodged to the left, then to the right,
Dropped down low before finally slaying it’s head off.
I went home holding the head up high in my hand.
When I get back to the village, there’s a huge crowd of villagers sheering mightly.
I hung the head on my door and celebrated.
There was singing and dancing and we ended with some roast turkey.
But after that I gallop away into the distance awaiting a new adventure.
In the dark forbidden woods there lived a hideous monster named Jabberwocky. The Jabberwocky eats many children everyday also he can hear from far away.
He hunts at night
And sleeps in the morning
The jabberwocky has slithy toves,
Kills 1500 a year he goes around
He diet is any animal that he can find
The Jabberwocky was sleeping
I sneaked up on him with and
Sliced him in halF
My mum told me not to go near the emerald-green forest in the forest lives a Spant it is a killer machine. It has sharp teeth sharp as a diamond. It is sixty-nine more times hairier than a bear. It is as black as the oil in the ground. But I went any way.
I have reached the trashed wood. I sometimes I regret what I am doing now. The trashed wood was as cold as the North Pole and as dark as a normal spider. There were slimy creatures all around me and they are all watching me.
Then there was a big growl in a dark cave. All creatures stop watching me and suddenly the Spant came out and called for more :he had a very loud voice.
They grew and grew and until he was the size of me. And then I got my Heavy shotgun out and I burned them.
It was that night I saw my father stone cold dead on the floor, he was covered in bite marks, I knew It was the Jabberwocky Its teeth more strong than metal and diamond put together. If it bit you the lava would travel through your veins in less than a mili second and give you a seizure. I knew if I didn’t kill him, he would kill me.
My green-eyed brother thought I wouldn’t kill the Jabberwocky, so I went out to find him. I travelled through the swampy woods; trees as tall as a castle, and I smelt the blood, which was from the terrifying charcoal-black beast.
many light years ago in a world
beyond your imagination
there lived a man but this
young man knew his life
meant more then being
gladiator fighting in the:
cut-throat gory blood-thirsty
coliseum. After a glories win
an old alchemist appeared
out of the blue like he had
teleported there “b-b-beware
of the shlfb(x2) as two tall men
picked him up by the arms and legs
go to the abounded forest .
a week later that got the young man thinking “I wonder what that the old
delirious man meant by beware
the shlfb in the dark woods ” it clicked
this could be my gateway to fame at that moment he realised that this was
his time to shine so he packed up his gear (dagger) long thick( rope) and money lots and lots of money
Beware of then Jabberwocky a green, orange .purple scaly but ferocious his dad was telling him to beware of the dangerous jabberwocky, which’s very strong and will never stop coming for the human
Long time ago, his dad died from the jabberwocky. He thought about his dad so much that he even to the Jabberwocky’s place go to the Jabberwocky’s place [WOODLAND which is a forest]
He found a large forest which was the forest of the Jabberwocky .He smelt the Jabberwocky and he really smelt like fish.
He ran to the Jabberwocky and jumped on him, so he bought his bolt action sniper and missed his snipe. He brought his razor sharp axe and killed him he died he went back home with head in his hand they all celebrated with food.
My granddad told me in the most serious way “Bewar the drator ! .” I ‘ve heard millions of stories about this monster , stories from when I was 16 years okl . It’s : has as a big-foot ; stinky like socks and disgusting as the bogie man. Yet I was determined-I could defeated this ugly lighting-yellow creature.
As soon as the sun came out , I ran so fast I huffed and puffed like I was in a marathon . The place I’m going to is a haunted island it’s Where I will meet the horrid beast . There was a myth I’ve heard , If you kill the Drator you will be crowned king/queen . When I left for haunt island , I knew the sun behind me won’t be on that horried island .After a while, I arrived at the Island but as I romed around I founed nothing but dead trees and squelchey mud everywhere .Suddently, I heard a loud “roooooor” could it be just maybe the Drator in the air.
There were legend of monsters and warrior who was Black Knight, and there was one monster called Dire. The Black Knight mission is to cut off his head and do a good celebration when his mission is complete.
The monster called Dire is the boss of all monster, what ever he says all monster do. Black Knight’s plane would be ready in 10 minutes, but Black Knight will need to chose a weapon he went to the weapon shop and he found a Gold Legendly Scar, so he took that and his plane is now finally ready go to fight Dire.
He had now finally took off and went to Dire’s base which was very far away, but for Black Knight he felt it’s very short of him, but only problem is he has a very dangerous volcano which can melt him in less than a second (speed of light) and also millions of monsters guards. So for Black Knight it should be difficent, but the only way he can go it is to be invisible with the shadow. When he arried after 3 hours and 25 minutes be need to jump out of his plane and they don’t know he was here. Now, he needs to sneak in the shadow on his side. When he got to his hideout after 25 minutes he wanted to fight so badly
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